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Sunday, 5 November 2017

The forest is gloomy!



The forest is sunless with trees spreading branches from left right and centre. The setting is bumpy and rough with small damp hills. It is peaceful and quiet except for the sound of cicadas rubbing their legs together and leaves rustling against each other. There is a damp and muddy smell and also very strong scent of flowers. The forest is cluttered with twigs, litter and leaves. It is calm with a flowing breeze shaking the leaves and the branches.

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write descriptive sentences using appropriate adjectives to describe the forest.

1 comment:

  1. hi its caitlin from paroa school i like this it was really cool and very descriptive next time u might want to shrink the post because it is hanging off the page and also u might want to make sure people are not fighting in the back round check out my blog at http://paroagreycaitlinb.blogspot.co.nz/

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